Chloe Ng, HE Career Coach, Manchester Metropolitan University

“Try to include something unique and memorable about yourself. Admission teams receive thousands of applications each day, so give them a reason to read yours more than once.”

1. Why have you chosen this course?

2. What excites you about the subject? 

3. Is my previous or current study relevant to the course?

4. Have you got any work experience that might help you?

5. What life experiences have you had that you could talk about?

6. What achievements are you proud of?

7. What skills do you have that make you perfect for the course?

8. What plans and ambitions do you have for your future career?

Admissions Tutors will be reading a lot of personal statements so it’s important to grab their attention right from the start. 

Here are the main things to think about. 

· Don’t overthink the opening. Just start by showing your enthusiasm for the subject, showcasing your knowledge and understanding, and sharing your ambitions of what you want to achieve.

· Avoid cliches! Remember, this opening part is simply about introducing yourself, so let the admissions tutor reading your personal statement get to know you. 

· Keep it relevant and simple. You’re limited on how much you can include so avoid long-winded explanations. Why use 20 words when 10 can make your point? 

Next, you’ll need to write about your personal skills and achievements. Universities like to know the abilities you have that’ll help you on the course, or generally with life at university

Don’t forget to include evidence to back up why you’re so excited about the course(s) you’ve chosen.

· Be bold and talk about the achievements you’re proud of.

· Include positions of responsibility you hold, or have held, both in and out of school.

· What are the things that make you interesting, special, or unique? 

Your work experience and future plans are important to include. You should share details of jobs, placements, work experience, or voluntary work, particularly if it's relevant to your course. 

· Try to link any experience to skills or qualities that’ll make you successful.

· If you know what you’d like to do after as a career, explain how you plan to use the knowledge and experience that you’ll gain to launch your career.

It’s always good to connect the beginning of your statement to the end and a great way to reinforce what you said at the start.

You want to see the ending as your chance to finish in a way that’ll make the admissions tutor remember you. 

This final part of your personal statement should emphasise the great points you’ve already made and answer the question of why you should be offered a place on the course.